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Poetry inspired by chat with wife this morning
What are you thinking,
You say do not know.
I ask again for you to share,
because this is no show.
Slowly the words begin to flow,
from I don’t know where.
You share much about your work,
I really DO care.
Now you have so much to say
when can I respond.
I hear a potential opportunity,
I really don’t wish to abscond.
But I say something wrong,
or at least not quite right.
Thankfully, I was relieved
it did not start a fight.
You tell me after,
what you needed to hear.
I appreciate this greatly,
because it’s not always clear.
So instead of repeating,
exactly what you said to me.
I thought about rhyming it,
So you would really, really see…
I am proud of you, with all that you do,
with teaching drama, house cleaning and being Mom,
No matter which shoes.
I see the growth in your confidence,
and stronger organisational skills.
Especially the connection between us
really gives me the thrills.
Let me finish by saying
how much I love you.
It can’t be said too much
Because it’s so true.
Source: quotesgram.com & quoteaddicts.com
Now I know what tomorrow’s theme for Funny Friday will be: Poetry is NOT Funny (preview below)
Source: whisper.sh
lovehappily said:
It’s cool. The message is clear and your use of simple words added zing to it. Well done!
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hubby1974 said:
Thanks for reading and your positive feedback. It’s the message that’s most important to me. I enjoy the challenge too, but I don’t think I’ll ever become a ‘poet’!
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lovehappily said:
You are welcome. You are already a poet. One thing is: Once you start, all that happens next is that you will get better as you keep writing. No poet started writing professionally. They all started as amateurs before they grew. The main thing is to start, and you have done so. So ride on. You are already a poet. I started like that, too.
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Jennifer Calvert said:
Reblogged this on INK AND QUILL and commented:
A lovely poem about a husbands love for his wife. Really sweet. ❤️
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hubby1974 said:
Jennifer, Thanks for the reblog and your beautiful comment. Your sharing spirit, is much appreciated in the blogosphere.
My wife is actually a much better writer than me – I am looking forward to her reply 😉
I also look forward to reading more from your blog. Take care.
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Jennifer Calvert said:
Thank you for sharing your poem! I’m loving meeting other poets. Please keep in touch!
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Un break My Heart said:
Reblogged this on Un Break My Heart and commented:
Love “us” like the first time…we do!
Very Lovely post!
I found it So beautiful and so much more!
I was overwheelmed!
Thanks much , you are worthy!
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mychildwithin said:
Beautiful! Just beautiful!
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Gradmama2011 said:
very enjoyable… it made me smile remembering similar conversations in the past. 🙂
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